"At first, I wasn't sure what to think of this story. It had a John that was hard to understand or relate to, but as the story progressed from chapter to chapter I found myself enjoying it more and more, and John has become a really cool character. Cameron is great in his story too and has a good amount of development. I have to say that this is one of the first dialog based stories that I've liked in a long time and I can't wait to see where this goes."

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I love these little chapter covers she creates.
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"I enjoy the story, and the characters are pretty cool. But I am waiting for the characters to do more than the little flirting that we've seen from them. I think it'll probably be subtle for a while since the story line if somewhat following the shows storyline. After all the subtly in the show, I personally read fan fiction for more than subtle, but that's just me. That being said, I can't wait to read your next chapter.
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"Rosie, has said that their relationship will move forward at some point—but knowing her, it'll be like chapter 30. ;)"

"a) Cameron is *too* human. It's not as bad as in some fics where she's crying all the time or indistinguishable from a normal teenage girl, but--and I admit I'm the minority in this--I prefer my Cameron more inhuman and pragmatically sociopathic in her portrayal. After all, Cameron had no qualms about killing the waitress she'd tied up. Presumably she wouldn't have any qualms about killing anyone else either, if they'd gotten in her way. Picture Cameron methodically executing an eight year old witness, then slipping off to a diner for some strawberries and waffles without even the shadow of remorse(*-see note below). That's what makes Cameron Cameron (and by human standards makes her a monster), but in this story that's a little too downplayed for my taste."

"I think that means that Cameron no longer sees herself as JUST a killer."